How to Write Better Copy Using Psychology


This is my process for writing high-converting copy on Shopify...

It's me, Osh by the way. And I'll also be sharing with you:

  • My top CRO test of the week
  • Two quick tips about landing pages
  • And of course, my copywriting secret-sauce

Let's get to it...


CRO Test of the Week

Test displaying UGC images instead of branded photos on your landing page in sections that educate readers on how your product works.


Top Two Resources of the Week

  • I've dropped a mega-thread here with some quick-fire CRO tips (link)​
  • And here's a 40m tutorial on how to replicate a $100 million landing page ​(link)​

How to Write Better Copy Using Psychology

Want to write copy that truly converts?

Here's 7 practical methods you can use right away.

These are the exact strategies I use in my own landing page agency and for my clients.

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#1 Instagram Bio for Killer Headlines

Funnily enough, brands often have better copy on their Instagram bio than on their actual website.

Here's some great headline examples, in the bio:

  • Snow: “Clinically Proven, Better for You Oral Care”
  • Skin and Me: “Personalized skincare, made just for you.”
  • Anthros: “The world’s most comfortable chair (says science).”

Check out your own Instagram bio, you might just have some hidden gems there.

If you don’t have a decent bio, check out competitors for inspo.

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#2 Leverage Customer Reviews

Customer reviews are a serious gold mine for copywriting material.

Pick out reviews that help alleviate the key objections and concerns new customers would have.

For example:

  • Effectiveness: How well does your product work?
  • Affordability: Is it cost-effective compared to alternatives?
  • Skepticism: What do users say about overcoming initial doubts?

Find headlines and copy ideas directly from what your customers are already saying.

This also helps you to learn to write in their language style — using common phrases and terms your customers actually use.

We did this recently for one of our client (see example below).

The term "dangerously-effective" came straight from a review.

This process is powerful.

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#3 Analyze Your Winning Ads

Look at your top-performing ads.

Dissect their headlines and body text to see what made them successful.

If you have video ads, extract the audio transcript.

Analyze the spoken words for powerful copy ideas for your website and landing pages.

Boom!

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#4 You Need A Clear, Concise USP (Unique Selling Point)

Your USP should be communicated in a single line.

If it takes more than a line, you need to re-write it and think more critically.

Examples:

  • Carepod: “The world’s cleanest humidifier.”
  • Snow: “Whiter teeth in just nine minutes a day.”

A strong USP hooks your audience and makes them want to learn more.

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#5 Know Your Demographics

Understand your customers' age, gender, and interests.

This will help you be more personalized with your messaging.

A certain writing style for women over 60 won't work the same for men under 30, for example.

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#6 Connect with Emotions

People make decisions based on emotions, even if they seem rational.

Understand the emotions tied to your product and weave these feelings into your copy.

Ask yourself:

  • Current feelings: What problems are they (potential customers) facing now?
  • Desired feelings: How will they feel after using your product?

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#7 Keep It Direct and Simple

Write as directly as possible.

Keep it short and sweet.

Always have a clear CTA that tells readers what they should do next.

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Mindset Tip: Speed + Strength

Ask yourself how you can convey your message in the shortest amount of time...

With the least amount of text, videos, or images.

Why?

Because the quicker you can convey you message and capture people's emotions — the more you will convert.

I recorded a full tutorial on this topic on YouTube here where I go over the whole process in a lot more detail.

Watch the video here (link)​

Enjoy


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How I Can Help

  1. I have over 12 hours of free video training on my YouTube channel (link)​
  2. I have tons of real-world case studies, tips, and advanced strategies on my Twitter (link)​
  3. If you are looking to get a high-converting landing page, apply here. In case you're wondering, we've worked with over 75 amazing DTC brands, including Snow™, Laifen™, Solawave™, Velvet Caviar™, to name a few!